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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-04-25 07:19 AM

A flash of bright red
Cardinals Royal Spring show
wings of God's Promise

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-04-25 09:10 AM

Another lovely piece from you. I haven't seen the flash, yet this year. But I am hoping to, soon.
Melton

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

2 posted 2001-04-25 02:58 PM

beautiful poem. these few words inspire a magnifiscent visual, and you accredit God for it, how wonderful. thak you.

dancing freely with the stars,
looking down upon streets and cars
from my world ,
a wonderful view.
i looked here,
and now found you!

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-04-25 04:00 PM

Paints a lovely picture. We have no cardinals here in northern Idaho. I know they are beautiful though.

Betty Lou Hebert

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-25 05:17 PM

No cardinals here in PR either, but this was beautiful. Very enjoyable read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-04-25 06:59 PM

Yeah I like it

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

6 posted 2001-04-25 07:12 PM

Whoa Ellie...you have these Haikus down!

Great job, again! Thanks for reminding us of the beauty in our surroundings!

~~Jamie

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..." --Ozzy

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-04-25 07:37 PM

No cardinals here either. This is pretty. Joyce

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

8 posted 2001-04-26 07:01 PM

Beautiful writing. Two females were at my feeder all winter so I never did see the red flash. The ladies are beautiful too though.

Jack

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-04-26 10:36 PM

never saw Cardinals before but enjoyed the haiku nevertheless

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2001-04-27 09:08 PM

This is beautiful Ellie! I saw a Cardinal last week, they are soooooo beautiful, aren't they?

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

11 posted 2001-05-01 11:48 AM

such beauty you weave in just a few words. superior piece.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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