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Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-03-17 03:45 AM

~ this is a very short one, but it shall only
describe a very moment - hope you enjoy ~

his eyes
make my voice blush
and his lips
kiss every sunbeam
that divides
the sky
between us
I see - I don´t see
I am lost
in his smell
his embrace
of warmth
that crawls from
his skin
onto mine
feet lose ground
from above
I look onto
two people
in love

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-03-17 05:57 AM

Makes my voice blush.

His embrace of warmth that crawls fom his skin.

Erotic and wonderful.

A flow of sensual fulfilment.

Great writing

Jon

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-03-17 08:41 AM

Ah love. Very sensual. Good job.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-17 04:39 PM

Welcome to Passions Why Not! This is very beautiful!

Denise

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

4 posted 2000-03-17 04:45 PM

Why not write some more like this.
Looking forward to reading them.

~Gene

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

5 posted 2000-03-19 03:14 AM

Yeah, more please!!

You describe that short moment so well, better than I could!

Great job, hope to see a lot more!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

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