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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
softly the piano sings for her fingers make it so simple physics cause the strings to let the music go melody drifting through the air like a gentle summer breeze displacing every want and care as she's tickling the keys from the other room I hear the notes, the cord, the rhyme just a tune to my ear that my heart is keeping time tom |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Wonderful Tom, music to my ears  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is beautiful Tom, very nice. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tom, this is a beautiful melody! Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
A very pleasant poem Tom, very nice. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem!! A pleasure read...music to my heart! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
To all Thanks for your kind comments.I started this in poetry challenge,my wife(Teri),was playing the piano at the time and the first and third stanza is what happened. I added the second while posting here. Thanks for your time and thoughts. tom love is what lovers do when your loving me and i'm loving you. me |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Beautiful! (I can almost hear the music playing by talented hands) Kim |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful melody you played for us here.  |
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