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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Threatening dark force~ Angry waves splash on fine beach~ Howls to the black sky Yet I grin, fascinated~ Its soothing voice calms taut nerves pls do read "Two As One" by u_gene and "Soft Memories" by Lost Dreamer too--both are very good attempts.....  ") |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Turbulent and calming at the same time. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Kaile, Good Tanka! you chose your words well. Inclan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Kaile! Denise |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
kaile, Very nice imagery. I think childomine found the zen. ~Gene |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kailie, You did a very nice job here on this as far as I can see. I am not that experienced to really know, and truly do not feel it my cup of tea, so my first will more than likely be my last for now at least. I leave it to the Master's Gene, and yourself to delight my eyes with your talent. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Very good words used to depict the feel of tension and calm. but I do wonder how that could ever happen...  How could you feel nervous and calm at the same time?_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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