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gumpno New Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 3 |
A ROSE U are as soft as that rose, and i hold u in my hands with the most care, but sometimes u show me your spines and i dont wear a glove so sometimes my hands are beginning to bleed but that is not only your fault i wasnt carefully enough and u cant always keep your spines at the inside but i will never wear a glove cuz otherwise i cant touch u. Here is a rose for u honey |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing it with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Chico Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67 |
Gumpno, I Really like the Image you portray here alot, It has and awsome message, but I think if you put a little more time and effort into it, It could be much more powerful. But please Understand that I am no great poet, and that this is just my opinion.. take care now... |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
I like your poem gumpno Hope honey likes her rose Jack |
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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
This poem is too true...you can't fully enjoy a rose without the risk of the thorns. I like it. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Aah, have to agree with Chico on this one.. nice poem, but not terribly strong.. I am sure you could improve it.. I do like it though.. ^_^ Lynne |
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