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Valuable Treasure(tanka)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-04-19 12:51 PM

No lust for money
Precious stones don't attract me
Contented with life
For gold hair glows on my head~
I am a sparkling gem too!

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

1 posted 2000-04-19 01:04 PM

But we already knew this.

Lovely tanka.

~Gene

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-04-19 02:38 PM

Kaile,
A Wonderful tanka, keep up the fine work!
Dennis :^)

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-04-19 02:48 PM

Kaile,

Nicely done and well said! You are all of that and more.

INclan

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-04-19 02:51 PM

This is lovely, Kaile....you write the most beautiful poetry...keep posting!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2000-04-19 06:18 PM

"But we already knew this"....seven syllables that warm my heart,u_gene

")

yes,Dennis,i will keep up my attempts at tankas....

")

"you are all of that and more".....thank you,INclan....another heart-warming seven-syllable compliment

")

ESP....i'm not sure whether i write beautiful poetry but i will keep posting...LOL

thanx

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

6 posted 2000-04-19 08:37 PM

this is lovely, kaile

yes, I agree with all of the above, and your words ring so true.. no material item is ever worth more than a kind soul.. *_^

Love your poetry.. always learn new styles of writing, when reading yours.. ^_^

Lynne

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2001-12-04 02:36 PM

Gosh, Kaile... Gold hair glows on your head??!! In April 2000? I thought you dyed your hair on your birthday? How could you have gotten that gold hair? =P

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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