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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Wonder Flesh bone vessel sea Air womb bedroom sky Foam light fire sphere Life day forest eye |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
This is freeverse. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Yes, a little too free for me. Sorry but I don't get anything from it. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
What did you expect? May not poet show work even when he is losing his mind? [This message has been edited by Essorant (07-27-2004 08:16 PM).] |
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hush Senior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 1653Ohio, USA |
Well, yeah, you can show work, but that doesn't mean we have to like it... sorry, that was a joke...  'Flesh bone vessel sea' This is the most interesting sounding of the four lines... however, like pete, I don't get it. How are all the nouna in this poem connected? What does it mean? Even the words in the lines don't seem to ge together, and I can't discern a pattern or meaning to it. Hope I've helped. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
'Flesh bone vessel sea' = Mortality Does that clear it up a bit? Thanks for giving this a chance. I usually don't write in this manner  |
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