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Ethan M. O'Callahan New Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 7 |
And every different face And every different name And every different time It always feel the same And so I've gotten to wondering Do I feel anything Or am I imagining Or am I remembering |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
it flows very well. cant think of any thingbad about it. its wonderful Jessica |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
I AM NEW HERE. BUT I DO WANT TO GET MY FEET WET WITH REVIEWS. I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT IS VERY DIFFERENT AND MADE ME THINK A LOT! I HAD A SMALL SUGGESTION I HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER (THE CAPS ARE JUST HOW I WRITE DUE TO MY EYESITE I AM NOT SHOUTING AT YOU>LOL) And every different face And every different name And every different time It always feelS the same >SO I GOT TO WONDERING Do I feel anything Or am I JUST imagining Or am I JUST remembering >>OR AM I JUST... ***************************** >ONE LESS BEAT AND BETTER FLOW >>SO READER CAN JOIN IN WITH OWN THOUGHTS FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY RAMBLINGS! THIS IS A GOOD WRITE AS IS. MANY THANKS FOR LISTENING. PLEASE REWIEW ONE OF MY POEMS IF YOU HAVE TIME. LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER MUSEconnieHUES I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
I enjoyed this one. I think it's very good. |
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