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Critical Analysis #2

Rainbow woman

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-01-20 07:21 AM

Rainbow woman

Rainbow words.
Sunset brings her clients.
Blue bed, cover the Virgin,
Light a candle, false moaning and
Rainbow words to meaning less questions.

Tonight is only seven.
Have a little time
For extravagance of
Digging a few truths.
Truth is the crease of time,
Setting its feet on a forbidden zone.
Eyes are weary,
Thighs are a little bit shaggy,
Black hole on the verge of blast….
Last of the nights of a career- road.

Load of truth.
Money has never acquired
A taste for truth.
She, a woman of twenty-two,
Goes back to work.

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

1 posted 2008-01-20 06:03 PM

Ha!

You tried to save her, didn't you?

Well done and deliciously indirect.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-01-20 08:59 PM

Sir Brad, explain more.
I am trying to sense the feeling of it.
Tom

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

3 posted 2008-01-31 03:47 PM

I don't think anything should be explained any more than it already is.

I'm not trying to be obscure, I just don't think this poem is obscure.

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