If I Could Only Have 1 More Chance

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Open Poetry #5

If I Could Only Have 1 More Chance

stephen j
Junior Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 21

0 posted 2000-01-15 06:03 AM

1 MORE CHANCE

IF I COULD HAVE ONLY 1 MORE CHANCE IT WOULD MEAN THE WORLD TO ME,
IF I COULD HELP YOU UNDERSTAND ALL THE THINGS I SAY,
IT WOULD MEAN THE WORLD TO ME,
I CANT HAVE THAT ONE MORE CHANCE,BECAUSE I ALREADY USED IT UP.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-15 09:28 AM

Again not meaning to preech but you need to add more too it e.g -

What Id give to get back
The things that I would do
That one chance given would be used
To the fullest to get me back with you

But lost is my chance
No where to be found
I used it last time you let me in
Now regret I feel within

Something like that just elaberate on your original piece and lengthen it tell us how you feel ect.

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