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Open Poetry #5

Humpty Dumpty Revisited

Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 331

0 posted 2000-01-20 11:02 AM

Humpty Dumpty
Sits on her wall
Moaning and groaning
For fear that she'll fall

If she won't leap
She'll never discover
That she is made out of
India-rubber.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

1 posted 2000-01-20 11:12 AM

Ted, very cute!! Brought a smile to my lips and a laugh from my heart.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

fc
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 130

2 posted 2000-01-20 11:15 AM

lol@india rubber... I wish, but I never thought hd lept, I thought he was pushed..

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-20 12:16 PM

ROFL

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-01-20 03:56 PM

hehe thanks for the laugh

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2000-01-20 04:00 PM

This is indeed very "cute".... But it packs much meaning into just a few words....

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-03-11 01:06 AM

A cute to the point poem...but, I do like the hidden message behind it...well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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