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Spare me your love
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Spare me your love |
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Stargazer Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 16Alvordton, OH USA |
I held your hand you touched my cheek I looked in your eyes my knees went weak Your skin so soft your love so sweet you always knew to sweep me off my feet Every carress is a lullaby and when they stop I think I'll die So break away now don't prolong the pain my eyes already swell with rain Let daggers strike and empty my soul before if fills and I lose control Stargazer "I wish they would only take me as I am." -Vincent Van Gogh |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful poem, and I welcome you to passions! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
very beautiful poem =) i loved it!! shannon |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yes, welcome. You have tons of potential... Mike |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
That was excellent  I like how you show with examples of why the pain should end quickly...well done |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really enjoyed this...welcome to passions |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - this is gently beautiful... lovely... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great Work!!! |
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