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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
Had a dream I was an adventurer Like Indiana Jones meets Lara Croft But I was more male And I jumped from one circumstance To another Evading Leaping Running Catching the bad guys Then I was in a room with a cobra And it bit me I felt the pain in my leg rise I guess it was the poison finding its way It was scary, I was wondering if I was going to die But there was an antidote I took it, my leg felt better And wondered if the adventure was over As I sat up in my bed |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
That was a lovely poem and you have a very creative imagination too! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patch, You better watch what you eat before you go to bed. Enjoyed the poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! What a nightmare! But more male than Indiana Jones?...that's not possible!  Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You do have a unique style that I enjoy - well done!  |
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