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Open Poetry #5

California

quicksilver girl
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since 2000-01-06

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Alberta canada

0 posted 2000-01-07 11:38 AM

     sitting on a grey vinyl seat
    staring into the
    multicolored sky.
    Red burns into
    Orangy yellow
    fades
    into a marine green
    melting through to blue

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-07 11:50 AM

Sounds like a beautiful view!

Denise

Shirleeah Storey
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since 2000-01-03

Posts 68
Delaware

2 posted 2000-01-07 01:19 PM

Been to California and know exactly what you are talking about. Beautiful poem!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 2000-01-09 10:21 PM

Moving this to open! Please check your email!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2000-01-10 07:31 PM

Very descriptive - nicely done!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-01-10 08:15 PM

Nice, Quicksilver Girl -
very nice indeed.
~*Marge*~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-01-11 08:25 AM

A lot said in very few words

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 264
houston, tx.

7 posted 2000-01-12 10:55 PM

Save me a seat!

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