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***Goodbye***
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***Goodbye*** |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Goodbye I am invisible to you You don't even know i exist I told you that i loved you.. You walked away I kissed you... You turned the other cheak I gave you my heart... But you didn't take it. So now i'm taking it back Were it is safe Were it belongs No longer will i let you be the cause of my pain or the reasons for my tears No longer will i watch you turn your back and walk away from me ***Goodbye*** |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'll have to say been there and done that..hang in there girl...the right one may be just around the next corner!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lots of feelings packed into this one...he's not deserving of you  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How truly sad...have a hug and a from me...K |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Boy do I feel sorry for him. He has lost a very sweet Young lady.Some people have no idea what they have or had until they`ve lost it. HIS LOSS Great poem and good luck God Bless |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I have been there, Dont worry its his loss your a wonderful person and if he cant return your love then there will be someone who will Hugs |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes, Goodbye, is the only thing you can say. Great poem! Denise |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you everyone!!!!! |
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