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Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
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near Vancouver, BC, Canada
0 posted 2000-01-11 04:27 PM

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the sign over the gate read
Remedial God School

what had once been a garden
had also been an orchard
and was now a parking lot

with row after forgiving row
of handicap parking




 Kevin
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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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1 posted 2000-01-11 05:13 PM

Love your strong message of irony here, Kevin, with the true handicap borne of the human dismemberment of our orchards and gardens.

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Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-11 05:26 PM

I agree! The irony in your writing is fabulous!  

 Denise
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