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Passin Thru
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Passin Thru |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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Just call me “Passin”, I’m passing through. It really doesn’t matter... Where I’m from or what I do. Living from a suitcase And always on the move... That’s why they call me “Passin” I’m “Passin’ Thru”. I’ve fought a few bad horses And rougher, wilder men. I’ve always loved my freedom.. A brother to the wind. I’ve roamed across the country- And slept beneath the stars. A loner and a drifter- I’ve seen my share of bars. I’ve buried all my family- And friends I loved as true- That’s why they call me “Passin’” I’m “Passin Thru”. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well-crafted poem Gunslinger. I like your style because it's very unique. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Unique, I do agree! Well done, Gunslinger! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I think you should stay a while..  HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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NOPOET New Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 2Canada |
Gunslinger I'm no poet,but I thought that was great!I wish I could ryhm like that. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Gunslinger, I've read a few of your poems and I like your style. Thank you for the good read. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Passin'?"..... Isn't that nearly "Passion"? ....Don't fergit yer laptop, my friend... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As always, a great read! *S* (But pull up a chair or hunker down on your boots and sit a spell. *S*) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Unsaddle, take off those boots and sit a spell |
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