I have never been loved like you love me

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Open Poetry #6

I have never been loved like you love me

Evad
Junior Member

since 2000-02-08

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-02-10 07:14 AM

I have never been loved like you love me
It is with the power of consistent intensity.

Your kiss makes tears roll down my face
Your gentle touch makes my heart race.

I love caressing your neck and cheek
I close my eyes but for only to peek.

While running my fingers through your hair
My entire soul is completely bare.

I always want to hold you tight
Every day and every night.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-02-10 07:20 AM

Love is a beautiful thing, Evad. Please allow me to give you a belated welcome to Passions. I look forward to seeing more of your poetry here.

Michael

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2000-02-10 07:26 AM

That was great for a first try, what am I saying, that was great fullstop . Thanks for making me smile .

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-02-10 08:08 AM

Very romantic Evad and yes I to love how soft and desirable a womans neck can be. James

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-02-10 09:55 AM

Evad~ I'm enjoying your poetry very much. You write very nice. This is very sweet!

-SEA

Tasi
Junior Member

since 2000-02-08

Posts 38
Canada

5 posted 2000-02-10 10:31 AM

"I close my eyes but for only to peek" I ask can you get any more romantic than that? Evad very vivid thankyou and a belated welcome from myself as well

Kyttn
Junior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 10
MO

6 posted 2000-02-10 11:23 AM

Very sweet. I'm a sucker for a good love poem, especially one I can relate to.

Kyttn

WilliamHugh
Junior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 12
MA

7 posted 2000-02-10 11:53 AM

I enjoyed that very much, while new to this I love work I can relate to.

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

8 posted 2000-02-11 03:22 AM

Beautiful poem! You described this love so well! I enjoyed this!

Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

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