Open Poetry #6 |
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Little Droplets |
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hailfellow Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 28 |
Forming clear, little droplets, Meandering down the glass, The drops get larger and heavier, Falling faster, twisting less. Hold my hand as we watch Heaven’s tears trickling by. I see your reflection in the glass, Droplets mask the tears you cry: Clear, little droplets; Getting larger and heavier; Falling faster. Hold my hand. Tears will pass. We watch the storm together; Feel the thunder in our hearts. The rain pours harder, faster. Lightening skips a startled beat. I hold you close, look at me. The storm will soon drift by. I see my reflection in your eyes: Your tears mask the tears I cry. Clear, little droplets; Getting larger and heavier; Falling faster. Hold my hand. Tears will pass. hailfellow "If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense." ~Nietzsche |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Hailfellow, I loved this...nice job! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Wonderfully written I liked this very much. thankx Rich |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A very expressive piece of work, I especially enjoyed the first stanza. ~ Claire |
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hailfellow Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 28 |
Sorry that I haven't been back sooner, but thank you for all of the really nice comments. It is good to hear from fellow poets. Thanks again. hailfellow "If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense." ~Nietzsche |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful work, with a slight tinge of sadness woven within. Exellent job! *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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