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As Hope Lay Dying - In Technicolor
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As Hope Lay Dying - In Technicolor |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Drink deeply of this chalice red, I've dubbed the color of regret. It's filled to full of hope not dead- To quench your thirst termed violet. Eat this wafer, tinged forest green~ For envy now; what failed to last. Your hunger-lust still yet unseen, In blue-sky hue of this repast. You dine on danger, what is done. Torturing with pearly appeal. For love is dead yet hope's still spun; Fate's earthen curse is now revealed. No closure when that spark of light Beckons golden as morning's sun. Demons are laughing in delight, Since hope's blackened bane is now come. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christopher - Christopher~ You light up the pages with the technicolor ink from your inkwell of delight. I love this ... bet you knew I would !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW!! Beautiful poem and presentation, Chris!! Absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Playing in the inkbox again- eh Chris??? G* This was a colorful display of emotions sir!!! I do beleive the red said the most!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Bang New Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 6 |
I'm new to the forum and this is the first piece I have read. So far, so good. I really enjoyed your colorful verse! Bang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Brilliant--but somehow the saddest rainbow... Hope all is well, luv. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, I see how you are - post a poem we "concepted" together - while I'm stuck out on the highway driving... And to do such a good job with it too...I hate you!!! "By Love found dead, hope yet may live, Forever!!!" Great poem Chris. Michael |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know Chris, if we gave out awards for poetry here, I'd bet this one would win an OSCAR!!!  I mean, with all the dainty, pretty colors an such. LOLSorry, couldn't help myself...LOL Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
OK - so you two had fun obviously... Well, again - interesting springs to mind (but not in that bad way) - well crafted C. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Well you never stop amazing me with your creativity Chris. Well done. Michael...I guess the next get together should be at your place. You can do the writing while Chris is on the highway..lol. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW..an impressive piece of work both in display and content |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
***A hush fell over the crowd*** Amazed by the splendor of your talents. You create a rainbow of colors within my monochomatic world. You also gave me insight into your future....perhaps black and blue?? What do you think Michael??? ***And then the deafening roar of applause*** |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Chris, what a great and creative poem. I love it ! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
"No closure when that spark of light Beckons golden as morning's sun" Whoooeee, ain't it the truth? Pretty potent stuff there m'friend. (purty colors...)May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very creative verse here Christopher, enjoyed it much. Well Done. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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