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yet another haiku:) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Yellow Paint on Brown Terrier Broad bright strokes engulf Indignant.Pity.Helpless Damn that pervert guy! Q:IS bold a better word for broad?pls give ur comments thax  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Kaile, Both words work equally well. It all depends upon what you are trying to say. I am trying to determine is the pervert is a person or a dog. Maybe they are one and the same....lol. Thanx for posting....it made me think. INclan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it was actually my friend who did this to the dog..... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
WHO on earth paints a dog for goodness sake?! I thought this only happens in moves (like Meet the Parents) haha _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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