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The Awakening |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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You move through me rapidly like the sweet fresh body of river cleansing revitalising awakening earth moving I feel you all around dancing trees rolling rocks twisting breeze and I sway uncontrollably trying to resist the intense force and waves of you I shall not for I cannot so take me... I'm yours Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Wow......very powerful stuff, DA.....great poem! I really enjoyed it. Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
Very nice! And yes, it's powerful. I especially like: "I shall not for I cannot so take me...."  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This sizzles. Very, very, nicely said... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a good one!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bobbycat, Lily B, serenity and Sharon so glad you all enjoyed it Thank you for taking the time to read and for your lovely replies. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! This is very moving, Dark Angel! Very lovely! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice poem DA |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, I really liked this, you are so good at short but powerful poems, I have not learned this wonderful way of writing yet. Thank you, Cerenity |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I do believe you've found your slice of poetic pie! You write these sooooooo good! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wow is all I can say. This was a powerful and beautiful piece. Lucky is the person who made you feel this way. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark ........... all I gotta say is WOW, this one really hit me. Parker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dark Angel this just blew me away with all the visual thoughts...looks like right now you are someones precious angel. James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Dark Angel, This is beautiful....I'm in awe of the heart that you write with. You've done a magnificent job!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent, Dark Angel Beautifully written Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Soul Sis... You have done a beautiful job here. And that someone is definitely lucky to have you in their life. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
WOW!....lemme just say that again.... WOW! That was the type of poem that captures the soul and leaves the mind numb. Great use of words and feelings. A great inspiration. Wonderful job! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you so much Denise -------------- Ruth honey, thanks dear -------------- Cerenity, Hi, thanks for your lovely reply and compliment. -------------- Angel, thanks sweetie, I appreciate your comment. -------------- kitkat, Thank you so much -------------- hey Parker, really hit you ey? hmmm well I'm glad Thank you. -------------- James thank you for your lovely reply. -------------- B_D_C hey wow thank you so much. -------------- Elizabeth, thank you so much --------------- Kamla Thanks sweetie so much --------------- SorrowMystress, so glad you enjoyed Thank you What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Heavy stuff DA!! Great poem....enjoyed it. Sometimes it is almost impossible to resist. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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