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I want you
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I want you |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I have a gift, to see right through, I know at once if you are true, I know that you just want me too, But I want you to love me. I've fallen into your spider web, I'm trapped and now I feel I'm dead, I wish to climb inside your head, I want you to love me. I haven't had these feelings long, I have to be the one who's strong, I know my feelings can't be wrong, I want you to love me. Why is it I'm always in second place? Why can't I ever win the race? Am I just doomed to have this place, I want you to love me. I let you go, it hurts me deep, I didn't know, there's no relief, I lost another good nights sleep, I want you to love me. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem. I like the way you used rhyme in this piece. Flowed well. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Some very heartfelt emotions expressed well. Nice work. David2  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thank you... |
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