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Procrastination |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Procrastination Journey's bound to nowhere can I catch one somewhere? Little twinkles of light gleam yet I can't follow the stream, the wind blows me backward I cant find the switch forward. Every highways a dead end short circuit within didn't send so where am I going to turn? my stomach wants to churn. Is there a map for this course? I'm feeling a case of remorse nothing connects broken links non committal mind only thinks. Tomorrow's here then it goes the motivation starts than slows everyday a repeat, months pass reflection same in mirrored glass. Casting your own it looks better maybe I could knit you a sweater never mind you would freeze first granted you had seen my worst. So now you want a tasty dinner you say you want to be thinner? This mind that occupies cripples you'd get more from ocean ripples. I've lost my sense of determination can I simply delete procrastination? |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hmmmm... maybe I'll respond tomorrow  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very nicely done ... could it have been better ... if you had written it sooner ? Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Andrew:Thanks...LOL Rex:Thank You, as for better if done sooner, no it would be better if I did it tomorrow...LOL [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Gloria! Denise |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Should I put off replying until tomorrow...lol LOVELY Jeffrey |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You Jeffrey: Thank you, glad you enjoyed and responded today. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, call me the procrastination King. If your journey is to nowhere or your ambition is to do nothing - just follow me...LOL Man, I relate well to this one. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL...never do today what you can put off until tomorrow |
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