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Open Poetry #6

Good Night

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-02-16 10:33 PM

Goodnight

I kept the champagne
on ice
as I served Cordon Bleu
over rice.

I thought you'd arrive
we'd dine
then to the dance
we'd drive.

My plans never happened
as I sat here
sipping champagne longing
for a friend.

I bid you goodnight
and sweet dreams
as I drift off to where
everything's Bright.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-17 12:11 PM

This is so beautiful and sad at the same time! Very well done!

Denise

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2000-02-17 12:43 PM

WOW...again, I am stunned at the essential and simple beauty of pure sadness.
Thanks for the great read.

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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