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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
0 posted 2000-02-16 11:18 PM

Unchartered Sea's

I sailed beyond
the boundaries
scuba dived
unchartered seas
couldn't find or reach
my destiny.

I deeply ventured
into myself
passing indecision's
on my way
answers floating
impossible to grab.
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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-16 11:34 PM

Great poem, Gloria! I've been on that journey too.

Denise
Michael
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2 posted 2000-02-17 01:59 AM

Yep - the story of my life wrapped up in two subtle paragraphs.  Geeze, think of all the ink and paper I could have saved...LOL
Great poem, Gloria...I realate so very well to this one.


Michael
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