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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Vacations O'er The common man is back to Work, To pay the bills you see, His obligations , he will not shirk, So he's off to work,...O.T. Hard at work, hard at play, Ideally it balances out, "But it's never really even", you say, "I want more playtime ", you shout! Ah, such is the life of the Workin' Man, With no fortune to provide his leisure, He earns his time off, not grand, But he savors each moment his pleasure. He works so hard both night and day, As if he were a servant indentured, But his heart awaits for the next GET-AWAY, And for another AWSOME ADVENTURE !!! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a delightful poem, Dennis! Welcome to Passions. Keep writing! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I'm glad to see you made it here--and posted a poem I can really relate to. Your doing good Bro. --keep it up, And welcome to passions--you've come to the right place! David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Me likes. Nice effort. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Dennis! Fantastic poem! I want to go on a vacation now!! I think they should be mandatory....once a month sounds fair....hehehehe.....again, great poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hi Dennis! Welcome!!!! I love that last stanza. hard at work and hard at play everyone needs a getaway! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WELCOME! Dennis this is a terrific first post here at the forum. The working man,well I can relate, being a working woman. Isn't it a shame that we have to eat! Ha, Ha! Can't wait to hear more great poems from you. Thank you, Ellie 02 |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And the winning lotto number is! Oops! Sorry. I was just trying to find a way to take that Vacation Adventure... Welcome to the family. I look forward to more of your work... |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Welcome to Passions Dennis!..I like this a lot. Had a sense of playfulness and it flowed great. and I can certainly relate...This heart is awaiting for a new adventure...looking foward to seeing some more. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dennis, great poem, different angle, welcome. Parker |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to passions Dennis, well I'm reading this while on vacation...I WISH well done I liked it very much...To the working man from the working gal |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank you for all your kind words and encouragement. Warning: You may have created a monster, Ha, Ha! Your friend, Dennis :^) |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Welcome to Passions! And when the "working man" needs a little adventure inbetween earned days off, he comes to passions to read our literature and vacation in our forum loft! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I liked your topic Dennis. Sure could use a getaway  Welcome to Passions. |
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