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A Marriage
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A Marriage |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Close your eyes....... Open your heart..... Hold my hand.... Let go of your fears....... Dream with me...... Keep Dreaming forever....... Wish for the stars....... Keep on the ground...... Say I love you........ Love being loved...... Open your eyes........ See the one who loves you forever....... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The way a marriage should be.....starting at the soul, this was beautiful~ |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful description!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Open your eyes...yes see the one who is right in front of you...lovely |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great poem, thanks for telling what is marriage supposed to be like! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Perfect!!!! You have captured it for what it really is. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Lovely ----Lovely ----- Lovely Good description with lots of feeling! didi |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Beautiful. This is exactly how it should be. To all who have this would understand, to all who don't would agree. Sweet and clear.  Jenn E |
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