| Open Poetry #9 |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
A new day dawns in this place....... A new life starts here today...... The deep night of despair passes....... Passes into the bright morning of joy....... Today we are reborn......... I and you become..... We and Us........ For today we said....... I do....... |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
I liked this poem. It is short, simple and conveyed a meaningful message with few words. [This message has been edited by Mona Lisa (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good poem, well done. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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