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Wedding Moment Haiku
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Wedding Moment Haiku |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~WEDDING MOMENT HAIKU~ 5-7-5 Two hearts joined as one wedding vows sealed with a kiss one perfect moment *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So wonderful to see you post one. Very lovely. Is this for you? Hoping you are this happy.   |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely haiku indeed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you both for your replies! No Mark, unfortunately this isn't for me, but I wrote it for a friend who recently was married Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Perfect 5-7-5 btw but maybe more of a senyru than Haiku since nature is not in play...other than the nature of love. Does not take away from the beauty of it though. Wonderful and as I said earlier, it is so nice to see you in the open forums again. Have missed your pennings. You were one of the first to reply to me when I came to Passions and I am so glad to see you still around. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
oh yes, thank you Mark you're right it is more of a senryu. And thank you once again for your sweet replies Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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