| Open Poetry #9 |
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lust |
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joy hester Junior Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 10 |
If you touched me, would I F A L L like a petal heavy with the morning's dew? Would I tremble like a violent volcano waiting to ERUPT fire or would I melt into a puddle of desire? If I touched you-would I Dare?- Would the guilt of these feelings be washed away by strength in your hands? OH< to be touched or to touch-- I don't know. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, know this...there's nothing like a little lust first thing in the morning! this is the first poem i read today... geez... and now i have to think about WORK!!! LOLthanks for the read... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
joy, this is a nice post. And the answer is, nobody does until it happens. be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I liked the analogy! Nice poem!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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