| Open Poetry #9 |
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Leafy Lofts (my first haiku) |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia
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"Leafy Lofts" Flutter in the breeze Dappled leaves on stately trees Bowing to the sun Linda M. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Marge, Just checking if the post reply works, as you said it wasn't working for you. As you can see, I can post a reply. Thanks for letting me know of a potential glitch. Linda M. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Marge has asked me to make her reply for her as her pc won't let her post a reply here for some strange reason, known only to cybergremlins. Marge said so ! ![]() Here is her response: Lovely Haiku sings Of branches in the treetops Breeze blows leaves about ~*Marge*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A gentle and beautiful haiku. Thumbs up for your first Haiku as you've past the test with flying colors. |
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kaile![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
linda,i think this was a fine first attempt and will be looking forward to more haikus from you ![]() |
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