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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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The same familiar pattern Begins to take form I feel you slipping away Through my fingers you slide As I try my best to hold on Yesterdays memories slowly Fading away in the background Like unclear hazy watercolors Running down a blank canvas In the corner of my mind. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"As I try my best to hold on Yesterdays memories slowly Fading away in the background Like unclear hazy watercolors Running down a blank canvas In the corner of my mind." Says it all for me - so very clearly beautiful |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals, I really don't know what to say, except that I found so much meaning in this short verse. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wilfred - Thank you.. I'm glad you liked it. Bill - You said more than enough, thank you. |
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