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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Brused that delicious worn shape. After years drawing alive, that test our mind, hands, and charm. When soft is gone something returns wounded. Walk voice. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
hmmmm... something returns wounded.... yes I think it does.... very crimson |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
We are on the same wavelength of late...smiles to you...I felt this one, deep. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
quite often I'm puzzled by poems such as this I can read a lot into it and it goes in more than one direction ... I enjoy reading your poems ... you're very good at writing this style of poetry ... I guess I'm just not so good at reading  |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
local rebel-thank you, hummm, cheers? as a dog always drinks kindly to the hearts open mouth and more. serenity-thank you for being some one who gets it, as usual many thanxs and blessings. rex-i know what you mean, but i don't know how to write "poetry" or anything in any form, i just write, and learn and read and write and chase my self in circles, but i love to do it, so i do, i'm glad you read it, sorry about all the direction, it is always intended to be so, i am a center spinning. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"After years drawing alive that test our mind, hearts and charm" ... Impactful verse you've penned here Braids" ... I like this poem of your's =) Coco =) |
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