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Open Poetry #9
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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-07-31 11:27 PM

moved to adult forum

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-01-2000).]
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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-01 03:39 AM

[ Cleaning up this part... without the poem this makes no sense ]

regards, sudhir.


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-01-2000).]
doreen peri
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2 posted 2000-08-01 08:07 AM

seems a little more appropriate for the adult forum, but that's just my humble opinion

hope you two had a good time
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2000-08-01 08:55 AM

MMoonchild,

     I liked this poem. You've captured the nervous feeling we've all had when getting ready to meet a new lover.  Very sensual and very well written  

                      rosepetals25
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