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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
When I look in the mirror I see a stranger- The reflection smiles back at me, With an air of confidence, A touch of arrogance. Someone unruffled by daily cares and stress. Is this the me that others see? Does the woman in the mirror Feel pain and loss and sadness, As I do? Does she cry, as well as Laugh? Does she feel the pain of others? Do people see the real me? Do I let them? [This message has been edited by L Tiuch (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That last line is the real question...."do I let them"....often wondered the same things myself looking in the mirror. Great idea and an equally great poem....thanks for sharing. Got my vote for sure! |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
LT - Wonderful poem, isn't it funny how we see that reflection in the mirror, and often wonder who it is we are looking at and what or who others see. "Do I let them?" I hope so. Bonnie |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
hmmm very interesting idea here. how often do we actually let someone see the real version of ourselves? good job presenting a very interesting idea. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LTiuch~ I'm drawn to 'reflections' ... with a tendency to try to be as honest with the reflection as I am with myself. My great grandmother taught me the daily ritual of 'reflecting' at a very early age. I've never forgotten it ... and I still look deeply into the reflections of who I am. Glad to have you share this piece. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
You raise some interesting, introspective questions. Very well done. Wish I knew the answers. Thanks, Pete |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Thank you all very much for your kind words. I appreciate the encouragement. Linda |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
You have really blessed me with this poem. I was actually looking in the mirror last night and wondering the same things that you mentioned in your poem. Thank you for sharing it!!!! )Keep up the great work. LITL, Heather Anne Miller/Gambler With God all things are possible. |
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