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misscris
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27
Leawood, KS, USA
0 posted 2000-07-25 03:32 PM

It's amazing how we can feel alone even when we are surrounded by people.


Desolation...

So I sit in my
Desperation and
Sadness.
Full of anger and
Hopelessness.
Pensive. Curious.
With a strong
Desire
To help.
Searching for a
Sympathetic and
Compassionate
Love to numb the
Pain.
© Copyright 2000 Crissa Seymour - All Rights Reserved
MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
1 posted 2000-07-25 07:18 PM

so simple yet written elegantly..I really like this

~~Maureen
misscris
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27
Leawood, KS, USA
2 posted 2000-08-03 05:06 PM

thanks for the feedback...I wrote this on inspiration...have you ever seen a starving, naked child sit and play in the dirt...ignoring his hunger, finding pleasure amongst the pain?

'i postpone death by living, by suffering, by error, by risking, by giving, by losing
--anais nin
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