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Enchanted Star
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL
0 posted 2000-07-30 01:03 AM

A promise is a promise
A kiss is a kiss
I've never wanted any more
than this
The words true from your lips
Tears from my eyes
A promise so true
A belief full of risk
Taking the fall
A certain fix
Feeling it all
This trust
This promise..


CindyLuC
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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-07-30 01:33 AM

wonderful...I loved the first two lines.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-07-30 03:52 PM

Nicely said in a few words! Sometimes that's all it takes.  
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