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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
my world is falling around me but i have fresh bread a cloud of darkness doth shroud me but i have fresh bread the ghosts of death surround me but i have fresh bread in life i am not fed but i have fresh bread |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great, short and sweet. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Josh... I know the humour behind this... lots of laughs indeed  Your writing style is very adaptable my friend |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
 josh, i liked your poem a lot. especially: a cloud of darkness doth shroud me but i have fresh bread the ghosts of death surround me but i have fresh bread (great rhyming) the poem made me smile a lot...but although it is masked by humor there is depth to it. yours, kat |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Josh, loved the humor, at least you don't have to eat cake. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ilph love your poem... very unique style..as long as you have water and fresh bread I guess you will survive..btw how does everyone know you are Josh...just curious ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Thanks everyone..hopefully maybe it is more than just humour. Just replying to Maureen's question...i know tara and silent beyond poetry. |
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