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Dark Poetry #2

All I Ask

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-08-25 10:57 AM

If you should leave me...
I would not ask for strength nor prayer,
But just to lie in the death of your silence...
And die 'mid the quiet there.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-25 11:31 AM

short and right to the point rex. Another poem well written.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

2 posted 2000-08-25 12:08 PM

Lovely - beautifully dreamy - You have felt it all Rex
Deepak

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-08-25 03:51 PM

Rex, you have a way of saying the most profound things in such a precise and to the point way, while still sounding romantic. Amazing. I love this, and have felt it just this way.
Sandra

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