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JandR4Eva
New Member

since 2000-09-20

Posts 9
Jacksonville, FL

0 posted 2000-09-20 04:47 AM

Passion is a vine.
Twisting & wrapping itself around every branch.
Loneliness burns like a dark fire.
Spreading rapidly, leaving no survivors.
If Loneliness is left to burn,
Passions forest would be gone.
Leaving the Ashes of Love.

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

1 posted 2000-09-20 10:33 AM

First of all, let me welcome thee to Passions in Poetry. This poem is a highly emotional poem that paints a darkly beautiful picture, that I can see as I read it. Welcome!!
--Little Girl

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

2 posted 2000-09-20 11:43 AM

Welcome to Passions! This is a great first post, and I hope to see more soon. This poem was done really well, I liked the way you compaired passion to a vine and loneliness to a fire. Very original, and very good.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-09-21 05:50 PM

Hey, welcome to DP!
What a lovely poem, great debute, really enjoyed reading.
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

4 posted 2000-09-21 05:53 PM

Great job
I really enjoyed this poem
keep up the good work
Blue

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-09-21 08:54 PM

So very true. Worded perfectly.
catalinamoon

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

6 posted 2000-09-21 10:01 PM

Really great poem...welcome to passions...

Dark Star

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

7 posted 2000-09-21 10:26 PM

WELCOME Great PASSION poem to enter PASSIONS with

LOL

LOVE ELMO <3

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

8 posted 2000-09-21 11:52 PM

There is a very nicely placed touch in this one dearie

.... a good piece for your first poem here....
Welcome to passion and believe me you'll really enjoy it here

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

9 posted 2000-09-21 11:52 PM

There is a very nicely placed touch in this one dearie

.... a good piece for your first poem here....
Welcome to passion and believe me you'll really enjoy it here

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

10 posted 2000-09-21 11:58 PM

Wow..what a great poem...it tells a complete story...so short but perfect..great job

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

11 posted 2000-09-22 08:17 AM

Indeed, welcome to Passions!

Like ya poem... I could see what you were saying... terrifc!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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