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Dark Poetry #2

My Knight

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-23 10:22 AM

Like a shadow in the night,
just before the morning light.
My heart wants to take flight,
and this feeling I must fight,
I must do what is right.
Move our love to a greater height
This seems to be my only plight.

Mixed emotions I must fight
praying for a brighter light
to shine the dark armour
of my knight.

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

1 posted 2000-09-23 10:31 AM

Started to read, and must admitt was a bit dissapointed........UNTIL the end...
the end made it exactly what it is....
WONDERFUL......
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-09-24 12:31 PM

Great, short little poem.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-09-25 05:15 AM

Fabulous...James

DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

4 posted 2000-09-25 12:29 PM

I agree the end is perfect!

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