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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i open up my eyes face self blinking silence at you daring to hope you see. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I know this is short - but I think there's a lot beneath these few words - speaks much to one who looks... Read my face or read my words. But please don't just look at either. -Me |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love it. That need to be seen. I understand it...  K |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's really cool how you wrote it...very good..I liked it.. Dark Star |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this is very nice. short, but meaningful. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul -the eels |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
shira it really hits you with those one word lines. of course i see you in this i wonder if the you you hope to see is the child. josh |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Shira, I see you. I see your works I see the darkness where sorrow lurks I see you don't give up the fight I am waiting here in the light. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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