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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
fold me in your suitcase wrap me snug take me with you to you i wont be a burden just remember unpack me when we get there people tend to forget that |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Josh, I read this a number of times to try and glean the meaning of it... as I got something different each time!  It can mean many things... but I tend to like my last interpretation... based on feelings. Maybe I am wrong Good to see some a new poem of yours! Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is cool.... another one of those short poems layered with meaning like it! K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
the best thing you ever written in my humblest of opinions. people tend to forget many things, dont they? shira |
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