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Forgive me father
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Forgive me father |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Forgive me father For i killed a man we'll Looking in his eye's I guess I Was just Releaseing Some of the demon Inside It's sad though the Guy that died Was I. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I love the way you use your words. I kinda guess the ending, but it was cool.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Jeremiah, Hey... I thought this was really interesting. I like the ending, and the part about releasing the demons inside. Very true... good work "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry" ~Lil OnE!~ |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Wonderful P.L.U.R. |
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