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Dark Poetry #2

Utterly Destroyed

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2000-10-25 12:29 PM

-What Now-
i feel so incomplete without her
so utterly destroyed
i feel so lost without her
such an amazing void

J.L. Koehler

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-10-25 12:53 PM

short and to the point.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2000-10-25 06:32 AM

Expressed well

Voids are quite awful... take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-10-25 12:29 PM

great write and great question but I know you'll work it out

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-10-25 01:44 PM

Few words needed to express such a large emptiness. Precise. Ron

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