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Dark Poetry #2

Take From Me

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-10-25 10:24 PM

Take from me my eyes
for i can still see your face

Take from me my ears
for i can still here you speak

Take from me my hands
for i can still touch you

Take from me my soul
and you have taken me

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-10-26 12:47 PM

WOW!! Now this poem is a real thinker. I like it alot. Keep up the good work!

DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-10-26 06:06 PM

I sense romantic impossibilities within these words...yes...James

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-26 06:08 PM

Take from me my soul
and you have taken me

short and precise. I like it.

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