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Dark Poetry #2

Control

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

0 posted 2000-10-29 07:34 AM

Unknowingly
You control me
Own me
My thoughts
My desires
My total being
I am lost
Wanting to
Give in.
Just wanting
To begin.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

1 posted 2000-10-29 08:02 AM

i like your poem a lot. i feel that way sometimes...
*sigh*
Wanting to
Give in.
Just wanting
To begin.

shira

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

2 posted 2000-10-30 12:43 PM

My problem is I give in too much

Good work in just a few words. It's amazing how you can say so much with so little.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-10-30 05:22 AM

Shira... thank you for your reply

... yeah, the feeling can be quite a bummer!

Jeremy... thank you for your kind words

And giving in too much can be a good thing sometimes!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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