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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
The Passing On I wake up bathing in sweat Still screaming from the fright In my dreams you're still haunting After you left that lonely night I remember holding you tight Keeping you close to my heart Yet never should I have known That we would be ripped apart I cannot breathe anymore Since that faithful day That you were taken from me When you passed away I will always think of you I will always remember I will always Love you I will always know That the night you passed on Was the night you became free... Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
very good poem .Losing someone is a hard thing to write about. You did a good job  Suzanne |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
You've done a beautiful job with a difficult topic. I enjoy the acceptance at the end. Well done. Sheila |
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