| Dark Poetry #2 |
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Ping Pong serve to Jannel |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas
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I thought you were mine Each night I layed awake I believed you loved me Yet those words are now so fake I only wanted to love you To show you my inner-self Giving you everything I had You would of been covered in wealth But once again you walked away Telling me all those lies Making me look like a fool I just dont understand why I would of given you the world Taking away your pain Yet that wasnt enough for you There is nothing left to gain So once again I walk alone Along the sandy beach Not knowing where I may end up With the stars within my reach No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Xeonox![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work my friend. Simply well put. ![]() Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
This is really nice. And thanks for giving me such a great line to work with. ![]() Jann Elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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kaile![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
simple, short, intense read thank you ![]() |
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